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Bejeezus
Joined: 12 Dec 2004 Posts: 1728 Location: Right Here
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 10:14 pm Post subject: You Make the Cards |
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I believe this is an old thread that should have been recreated when the forums reset.
But since it hasn't, I guess I shall be the one that does so.
This is an old card is posted in the old forums, with a little revision to make it a bit less broken.
Dark Thunder {BR}
Instant
Dark Thunder deals 4 damage to target creature or player. A creature dealt damage in this way can't be regenerated.
Rare
Oh it's more than a Shock now
-----Another Card-----
Drain Conscience {2BB}
Sorcery
Target player discards two cards from his or her hand, you draw a card for each card discarded this way.
Common
Why should you know this when you don't know how to use it?
Hopefully this takes off like the last one has.
Have fun with it. |
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Shepherd
Joined: 18 Jan 2005 Posts: 390
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 10:37 pm Post subject: |
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In memory of Disciple of the Vault, hated by all save those who chose to use its malevolent power...
Keeper of the Vault
BB
Creature - Human Cleric
Whenever a permanent leaves play, its controller loses one life.
2/2
Uncommon
If you thought his disciples caused enough destruction to change the world... |
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Canabis
Joined: 14 Sep 2005 Posts: 78
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 10:57 pm Post subject: |
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I duno Lets see what happens
1GG - History's Forgotten
Sorcery - Arcane
Return 2 target cards from your Graveyard to your Hand
Splice into Arcane - 3G
whats lost is not forgotten |
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brottor
Joined: 01 Oct 2004 Posts: 442
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 11:21 pm Post subject: |
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| Canabis wrote: | I duno Lets see what happens
1GG - History's Forgotten
Sorcery - Arcane
Return 2 target cards from your Graveyard to your Hand
Splice into Arcane - 3G
whats lost is not forgotten |
change it to History Unforgotten
it would be more sexy like: Gifts Ungiven
and nice avatar FFVII pwns all! |
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quidam
Joined: 22 Apr 2005 Posts: 196
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 1:16 am Post subject: Re: You Make the Cards |
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| Bejeezus wrote: | Dark Thunder {BR}
Instant
Dark Thunder deals 4 damage to target creature or player. A creature dealt damage in this way can't be regenerated.
Rare
Oh it's more than a Shock now |
That's ridiculous. Compare Volcanic Hammer--1R, 3 damage, SORCERY. At {1BR} it would be better--or {BR} and 3 damage, and instant. But as is, it's too much.
Also, the whole "card reference pun" thing is terribly trite.
| Quote: | 1GG - History's Forgotten
Sorcery - Arcane
Return 2 target cards from your Graveyard to your Hand
Splice into Arcane - 3G
whats lost is not forgotten |
That might be too good for T1. Compare to Regrowth, which is restricted for the recursion of broken stuff. An extra {G} for an extra card? The splice isn't that relevant in that format, but it might be too good without some sort of disadvantage. Perhaps regrowth 2, discard a card? |
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NightFlare
Joined: 08 Sep 2004 Posts: 234
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 2:15 am Post subject: |
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My favorite card from ol' brainburst forums:
Psychic Twist 1U
Instant
You control target instant spell, sorcery spell, triggered or activated ability.
No i didnt forget target changing. |
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Craze
Joined: 30 Jan 2005 Posts: 5053 Location: Indiana, U
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 6:42 am Post subject: |
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I stared this originally...hehe
oh well heres mine:
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ImaPirate
Joined: 26 Jun 2005 Posts: 8
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 7:42 am Post subject: |
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Phantasmal Adept- UU
Creature- Wizard
You may play {this} any time you could play an instant.
When {this} comes into play, counter target spell.
0:Counter target spell, then return this to your hand. You may play this ability no more then once per turn.
At the beginning of each players upkeep, put a Decay counter on {this}. Whenever {this} has 3 or more Decay counters on it, remove it from the game.
0/3 |
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killersilver
Joined: 09 Sep 2005 Posts: 1
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 8:01 am Post subject: |
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I dont even have a name for my card, im not good at it but i have always wanted to play a cards like this:
1UU
Instant
Choose one: Counter target spell or draw two cards. |
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quidam
Joined: 22 Apr 2005 Posts: 196
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 8:23 am Post subject: |
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| Craze wrote: | I stared this originally...hehe
oh well heres mine:
 | As is, that will remove itself, and the trigger for playing them will not happen. Needs rewording.
| Quote: | Phantasmal Adept- UU
Creature- Wizard
You may play {this} any time you could play an instant.
When {this} comes into play, counter target spell.
0:Counter target spell, then return this to your hand. You may play this ability no more then once per turn.
At the beginning of each players upkeep, put a Decay counter on {this}. Whenever {this} has 3 or more Decay counters on it, remove it from the game.
0/3 | A counterspell with free double counter and recursion, that doubles as an instant 0/3 wall? That is completely broken. Compare to Mystic Snake--{1GUU}, You may play Mystic Snake any time you could play an instant. / When Mystic Snake comes into play, counter target spell.
For 1G less, you're making something far, far more powerful. Perhaps try 2UU, and bouncing it costs UU? At those stats it might be balanced.
The whole decay counter thing is a no-go. It'll just be bounced to hand before it gets to die. I'd go for something more like this:
Phantasmal Adept - {2UU}
Creature - Wizard
You may play Phantasmal Adept any time you could play an instant.
{UU}: Counter target spell, then return Phantasmal Adept to your hand. Play this ability only once each turn.
At the beginning of each player's upkeep, remove Phantasmal Adept from the game.
0/3
Far more balanced version--and it's still very playable. |
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Neo_Krausser
Joined: 30 Jul 2005 Posts: 216 Location: Your Bed
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 8:44 am Post subject: |
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I like this one:
Pwned 0
Instant
Kick target player square in the nuts.
I warned you, I really did.
-OR-
The Sound of Silence 2UU
Insant-Arcane
Counter Target Spell
Splice onto Arcane U
Our forefathers were right in assuming that you are just an insolent fool.
-OR-
Trogdor, the Burninator 3RRW
Legendary Creature-Dragon
Flying, Trample
When Trogdor, the Burninator comes into play all Soldiers get -1/-1 until end of turn.
R: Trogdor, the Burninator gets +1/+0 until end of turn
W: Trogdor, the Burninator gets +0/+1 until end of turn
As long as Trogdor, the Burninator is in play, all other dragons get +1/+1 and all soldiers get -1/-0.
4/3
As soon as the soldiers saw the immense task that lay before them, they said "screw this" and were burninated right where they stood. |
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DrFueng
Joined: 17 Aug 2005 Posts: 199
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 3:03 pm Post subject: |
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This is for all the Robert Jordan fans. Its from the second set in a WoT block I'm making.
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Dragon_Lady
Joined: 02 May 2005 Posts: 237
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:37 pm Post subject: |
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Here was one I did one Londes.com...
Tears of O-Kagachi 1WWW
Enchantment
Whenever a creature with power 4 or greater would come into play, remove it from the game instead.
Twisted Memories 2UB
Instant
Return up to two cards in your graveyard to your hand. You lose 2 life for each card returned this way. |
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Quality_Bear
Joined: 04 Sep 2005 Posts: 124
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:56 pm Post subject: |
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ROBERT JORDAN KICKS ASS  |
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ElvishGod
Joined: 12 May 2005 Posts: 3009
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:38 pm Post subject: |
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I think these cards are pretty damn cool.
Plan for the Future [2UUUU] {r}
Legendary Enchantment
Play with the top card of your library revealed.
Discard a card: Draw a card.
Discard a card: Put the top card of your library on the bottom of your library.
Sacrifice Plan for the Future: Draw a card.
Learn from the Past [2BBBB] {r}
Legendary Enchantment
Remove a creature card in your graveyard from the game: Return target creature card in your graveyard to your hand.
Remove a creature you control from the game: Return a creature card with a lower mana cost from your graveyard to play.
Sacrifice Learn from the Past: Return target creature card from your graveyard to your hand.
Live in the Present [2GGGG] {r}
Legendary Enchantment
Sacrifice a land: Add GG to your mana pool.
Sacrifice a creature: Search your library for a basic land card and put it into your hand.
Sacrifice Live in the Present: Search your library for a creature card and put it into your hand.
This one is... interesting. Easy to make broken.
Time Jump [WGRBU] {r}
Sorcery
Put all creature cards from your hand into play. Then, discard your hand and remove your library from the game.
I was bored:
Pure Confusion [RRRR] {u}
Instant
All attackers become blockers; all blockers become attackers. (All assigned blockers become blocked by the assigned attacking creatures. Unblocked attackers are removed from combat.)
Wait, this card has no use. It just... sucks. There is no way to use this card. WTF!
I need a common in this batch:
Venus Fly-Trap [G] {c}
Creature - Plant
Defender
Venus Fly-Trap can only block creatures with power equal to or less than the total number of Venus Fly-Traps in play.
3/3 |
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