G/r/b need help tuning

Morrolan · Joined: 26 Oct 2005 Posts: 9

// Lands
4 [TSP] Mountain (1)
2 [TSP] Swamp (1)
8 [TSP] Forest (1)
1 [TSP] Urza's Factory
3 [TSP] Terramorphic Expanse
3 [PLC] Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth

// Creatures
3 [TSP] Mogg War Marshal
3 [FUT] Street Wraith
4 [TSP] Bogardan Hellkite
3 [FUT] Tarmogoyf
4 [TSP] Greater Gargadon
4 [FUT] Gathan Raiders
4 [TSP] Kaervek the Merciless
4 [TSP] Greenseeker
4 [TSB] Wall of Roots

// Spells
3 [TSP] Tendrils of Corruption
3 [TSP] Dread Return

Ideas would be helpful, i know i need more spells but haven't figured out what to put unless i use harmonize... thoughts please.

ebbitten · Joined: 01 Jan 2007 Posts: 41

way too many "bombs" IMO, and is 23 land really enough, especially when 3 are legendary? i would kaerveks for harmonizes to start with, and probably shift a bogarden hellkite to a tarmogoyf to help the early game more. You could keep these in the sideboard against control or something