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Jacois



Joined: 05 Sep 2004
Posts: 1201

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 5:47 pm    Post subject: Create a Card 98 Reply with quote

Create a permanent that produces mana. No Planeswalkers or double faced cards.

Flavour will be used to determine tiebreakers. I'm looking for originality without being too wordy, I hate wordiness.

I will be grading on an A-F scale and first impressions are everything with me. I can be pretty sarcastic and scathing in my judging so be aware of this when making your card. Cards worded incorrectly or that don't make sense will receive an F.

Good luck!
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Ffancrzy
Level 1 Judge


Joined: 30 Apr 2006
Posts: 258

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 6:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Paradise

Land-Common

Paradise enters the battlefield tapped.

T: Add 1 mana to your mana pool. Gain 1 life.


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sc4rs



Joined: 23 Mar 2006
Posts: 859

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 6:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Loom of the Universe
4GG
Enchantment - Mythic Rare
Whenever you cast a spell, add X green mana to your mana pool, where X is that spell's converted mana cost minus 1.
"The strands of the universe are all connected. We have merely to stitch in a design." -Hakim, Loreweaver
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Duodax



Joined: 29 Jan 2006
Posts: 390

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 6:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Diamond Forge

Land RARE

T: Add 1 to your mana pool.

3: Diamond Forge gains: "T: Add 2 mana of any one color to your mana pool."
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huntergatsby



Joined: 31 Aug 2008
Posts: 107

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Spectral Garden

Land-Mythic Rare

@ T Add one of any mana to your mana pool

Sacrifice a land: Add a mana of any color to your mana pool.



@ is the green phyrexian mana.
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MassO



Joined: 10 Mar 2006
Posts: 260

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jace's Reward (U)

Legendary Enchantment (Mythic)

When you cast a spell, draw a card.

If a player has drawn more than 3 cards a turn, sacrifice Jace's Reward.

"It is always better to be in the good grace of Jace." - Tezzeret
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JacobMatthew



Joined: 16 Dec 2009
Posts: 131

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Materia Blade - Rare
Artifact - Equipment - 2(G phyrexian mana)
Equip 2(G phyrexian mana)

Shroud

At the beginning of your postcombat main phase, add G to your mana pool equal to equipped creatures converted mana cost.

Equipped creature has first strike.

"Well, it's no Buster Sword..."

Making it postcombat is balanced i think, that way you can equip for free sometimes if the guy is 3cc and add GGG post combat, but , if you attack with him and he dies, you dont get the mana. So i thought that was a cool trade off.
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Ffancrzy
Level 1 Judge


Joined: 30 Apr 2006
Posts: 258

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

JacobMatthew wrote:
Materia Blade - Rare
Artifact - Equipment - 2(G phyrexian mana)
Equip 2(G phyrexian mana)

Shroud

At the beginning of your postcombat main phase, add G to your mana pool equal to equipped creatures converted mana cost.

Equipped creature has first strike.

"Well, it's no Buster Sword..."

Making it postcombat is balanced i think, that way you can equip for free sometimes if the guy is 3cc and add GGG post combat, but , if you attack with him and he dies, you dont get the mana. So i thought that was a cool trade off.


You can also just not attack with how that is worded.
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kumagmd



Joined: 15 Feb 2009
Posts: 307

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Might just be that the most awesome mana permanents have already been made *and* broken: lands, Birds of Paradise, Mana Vault, Grim Monolith, Eladamri's Vineyard, et cetera. HOWEVER!

*edited because was allegedly a functional black lotus. I tried to word it much shorter so that it would fit into an actual card =)

Dominaria
Legendary Land - Dominaria (R)
You may not play Dominaria unless you return 5 basic lands you control from play to their owner's hand.
T: Add 3 mana of any one colour to your manapool.
Dominaria counts as a basic plains, basic island, basic swamp, basic mountain and basic forest.
"It's not much, but it's home."

It's not broken (I like to believe) since it requires basic lands. I tried to word it to activate full domain - if it doesn't, it should =P.


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pg8



Joined: 27 Feb 2011
Posts: 299

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

kumagmd wrote:
Might just be that the most awesome mana permanents have already been made *and* broken: lands, Birds of Paradise, Mana Vault, Grim Monolith, Eladamri's Vineyard, et cetera. HOWEVER!

Dominaria
Legendary Land - Dominaria (R)
When Dominaria enters the battlefield, return 5 basic lands to you control to its owner's hand or sacrifice Dominaria.
T: Add 3 mana of any one colour to your manapool.
Dominaria counts as a plains, island, swamp, mountain and forest.
"It's not much, but it's home."

It's not broken (I like to believe) since it requires basic lands. I tried to word it to activate full domain - if it doesn't, it should =P.


Your entry is a functional reprint of Black Lotus. See the errata for Lotus Vale for a better template.
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pseudodespot



Joined: 08 May 2011
Posts: 496

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 2:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Deepdriller {4}

Artifact Creature - Construct (uncommon)

Defender

{t}, sacrifice a land: Add {2} to your mana pool for each land card in your graveyard.

Exile a land card from your graveyard: ~ loses defender until end of turn.

3/4

Look where we are! What is 4 kilometers straight down?


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AxiomBlurr



Joined: 11 Jul 2010
Posts: 411

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 2:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tincture Vial (2)

Artifact Uncommon

Return Tincture Vial to its owner's hand: Add one mana of any colour to your mana pool.

Cycling (2)

Utility is not a matter of who, where and why...It is a matter of what, when and how" - Mishra to Urza
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Mrrr



Joined: 06 Aug 2011
Posts: 65

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 3:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

River Hippo

1UG

Creature - Hippo (rare)

Islandwalk

Whenever River Hippo deals combat damage to a player, tap target land that player controls. It doesn't untap during its controller's next untap step. Add to your mana pool one mana of any type that land could produce.

3/3

"Three tonnes of bad temper"
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derflippi
Level 4 Judge


Joined: 19 Mar 2005
Posts: 1402
Location: Weiterstad

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Krosan Dragon - 4GG
Creature - Dragon *Rare*
Trample
Put a -1/-1 counter on Krosan Dragon: Add G to your mana pool. Activate this ability only any time you could cast a sorcery.

At beginning of your upkeep, remove all counters from Krosan Dragon.

The indisputed Master of the Forest of Krosa
6/6


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pseudodespot



Joined: 08 May 2011
Posts: 496

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 5:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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