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Create a Card - Round 62


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AxiomBlurr



Joined: 11 Jul 2010
Posts: 411

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 2:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Agile Fiddle-Back (Uncommon)

GGG

Creature - Spider

Reach, Deathtouch, Flash

3/4



Ambush is 3/4 of the battle.


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inkevitch



Joined: 03 Jun 2006
Posts: 11

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Disarming Spider
1G
C
Reach

Whenever disarming spider blocks a creature, unattach any equipment attached to that creature.

1/3

"Where did I put my jitte?" Toshiro Umezawa
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Mizukage



Joined: 24 Jul 2009
Posts: 106

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is it just me or did the last round's judge have no idea what he was talking about - that round was run more like modify-a-card than create-a-card with the way he judged...didn't even have a sense of humor...

Quote:
An elf is not caught by surprise by things in front of her/him. Make the dude a goblin in your flavortext please.


watch Elf (2003) man...

Anyways, enough with my useless discontented ramblings, heres my card:

Quote:
Decree of Singularity | 2W

Enchantment - Aura (U)

Enchant Permanent

Decree of Singularity can't enchant basic lands.

Flash

Enchanted permanent and all permanents with the same name as that permanent are legendary.

(Reading from a psychological evaluation of himself)
Displays textbook narcissism?
...
Agreed.


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AppleofEris



Joined: 20 Dec 2006
Posts: 553

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 7:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mizukage wrote:
Is it just me or did the last round's judge have no idea what he was talking about - that round was run more like modify-a-card than create-a-card with the way he judged...didn't even have a sense of humor...

Quote:
An elf is not caught by surprise by things in front of her/him. Make the dude a goblin in your flavortext please.


watch Elf (2003) man...

Anyways, enough with my useless discontented ramblings, heres my card:

Quote:
Decree of Singularity | 2W

Enchantment - Aura (U)

Enchant Permanent

Decree of Singularity can't enchant basic lands.

Flash

Enchanted permanent is Legendary.

(Reading from a psychological evaluation about himself)
Displays textbook narcissism?
...
Agreed.


Interesting card. One blue mana to destroy target permanent if another permanent of the same name is in play.
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ikazuchi



Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 293

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 8:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

it cost 2W. not U.
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Jpsn54



Joined: 28 Jun 2011
Posts: 27

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 1:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AxiomBlurr wrote:
Jpsn54 wrote:
Black Widow 1BG
Creature - Spider UC

Reach, Vigilance, Deathtouch

When Black Widow deals damage to a player, that player discards a card.

"Its kiss is as dangerous as the deadliest of curses" - Liliana Vess

1/4


Awesome design!! smells like a rare...but awesome awesome design!!


Thanks man!

Yeah i know it's a little powerful, that's why i nerfed it, the original version had "discard a card at random", but it felt too much like a rare. However, anything that lowers its 1 power makes it easily killable through blocking because it doesn't have any kind of evasion (unlike the similar rare hypnotic specter), so i believe uncommon is fair.

PS: I'm proud of the flavour tbh xD
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Epic-Juzam37



Joined: 09 Jul 2005
Posts: 70

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jpsn54 wrote:
Black Widow 1BG
Creature - Spider UC

Reach, Vigilance, Deathtouch

When Black Widow deals damage to a player, that player discards a card.

"Its kiss is as dangerous as the deadliest of curses" - Liliana Vess

1/4

love the card...doesnt look uncommonable though...its better than ohran viper.
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Jpsn54



Joined: 28 Jun 2011
Posts: 27

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 7:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Epic-Juzam37 wrote:
Jpsn54 wrote:
Black Widow 1BG
Creature - Spider UC

Reach, Vigilance, Deathtouch

When Black Widow deals damage to a player, that player discards a card.

"Its kiss is as dangerous as the deadliest of curses" - Liliana Vess

1/4

love the card...doesnt look uncommonable though...its better than ohran viper.


Ok, i'll make an in-depth analysis as to explain why i decided not to nerf it further:

(Assuming that the card is implemented in the current format)

Reason number 1: It would lose flavour: If i had decided to make it a 2/3 or 1/3 and eventually monocolored, it would prejudice the concept of the card, thus i decided not to.

Reason number 2: It would be unplayable: You are comparing it to ohran viper, a card that not only is monocolored but also existed in a format where removal did not include lightning bolt, incinerate, gftt, dismember, searing blaze, etc. What i'm saying is that ohran viper would have ZERO chance of playability in the current format, even as an uncommon.

Reason number 3: There was no need to: The card forces you to play BG, which is not that strong of a color combination right now... it could find its place as a singleton in pod builds, but it certainly wouldnt cause the impact oblivion ring caused as an uncommon.

So, i decided to nerf it from "discards a random card" to "discards a card", and that seems enough to me.

But let's see what the judge thinks xD
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xJudicatorx



Joined: 27 Aug 2007
Posts: 696

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Swan Umbra UW
Enchantment - Aura (U)

Enchant Creature
Totem Armor

If a source would deal damage to enchanted creature, prevent that damage. The source's controller draws cards equal to the damage prevented this way.
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Mizukage



Joined: 24 Jul 2009
Posts: 106

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AppleofEris wrote:
Mizukage wrote:
Is it just me or did the last round's judge have no idea what he was talking about - that round was run more like modify-a-card than create-a-card with the way he judged...didn't even have a sense of humor...

Quote:
An elf is not caught by surprise by things in front of her/him. Make the dude a goblin in your flavortext please.


watch Elf (2003) man...

Anyways, enough with my useless discontented ramblings, heres my card:

Quote:
Decree of Singularity | 2W

Enchantment - Aura (U)

Enchant Permanent

Decree of Singularity can't enchant basic lands.

Flash

Enchanted permanent is Legendary.

(Reading from a psychological evaluation about himself)
Displays textbook narcissism?
...
Agreed.


Interesting card. One blue mana to destroy target permanent if another permanent of the same name is in play.


yeah, it costs 2W but has a narrower application than oblivion ring. i was just dreaming of a card that hits both splinter twin, valakut, and sometimes even caw and steel. the current t2 has a hard-on for duplication. (see Doubling Chant)
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Conkisstador



Joined: 08 Sep 2004
Posts: 543

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Radchek wrote:
Mana Blast xR
Instant- UC

Mana Blast deals 3 damage plus x to target creature or player.

"Jace scoffed as Chandra started to form a lightning bolt, at the last moment her incantation changed and she pour pure rage into the spell to her opponents demise." Duels of the Planeswalkers: World Shapers incarnate.


I'm LOLing at your lightning bolt.
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ikazuchi



Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 293

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Adaptive Weaver 2G
Creature - Spider (Uncommon)

Hexproof, reach

0: Until end of turn, Adaptive Weaver gets -1/+1 and gains infect.
Activate this ability only once each turn.

“It is not the strongest of the species that survives, nor the most intelligent that survives. It is the one that is the most adaptable to change.” —Garruk Wildspeaker

2/3


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Raged23



Joined: 19 Oct 2009
Posts: 1

PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 2:52 am    Post subject: Create a Card Reply with quote

Inspired by Standard.

Razor Web Spider - 2g
Creature - Spider (uncommon)

Reach
Flying creatures get -1/-1.

"Not even a squad of hawks can make it threw its web alive."
1/3

Little unrefined. The limit to a uncommon makes it rough.
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Sligh_Br



Joined: 11 Jul 2011
Posts: 76

PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll be judging it Thursday. ^^
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Webstar716



Joined: 08 Jul 2011
Posts: 3

PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Steel Web Enforcer 2GG

Creature - Spider (Uncommon)

Reach

~ enters the battlefield with 2 +1/+1 counters on it.

Remove a +1/+1 counter from ~: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature, that creature has reach.

Remove a +1/+1 counter from ~: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature, that creature can't attack or block, and it's activated abilities can't be activated.

A wisp of gossamer, about the size and substance of a spider's web.
-Monica Baldwin

0/1


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